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托福写作真题范文-8月24日

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2019年8月24日 独立写作题目:In areas where there are many restaurants, some people prefer to eat at restaurants frequently. Other people prefer to cook at home and rarely go to restaurants.Which do you prefer?

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开头段落时,不要过分铺设“大背景”,加快信息速度,避免读者的厌恶感。

People may eat out frequently。 Although this is a reasonable choice of dining and lifestyle among modern people, particularly among busy professionals, I prefer home-cooking and believe the multiple benefits of it。

就这个话题而言,让步有必要,而且好写。

Professional chefs cook better than home cooks. That is the obvious. Compared with home cooks, who are amateurs, cooking professionals have the knowledge and skills to prepare food in a delicate way. Restaurants are therefore inviting for the better taste. In addition, in restaurants, there are waiters serving diners, and at home, there may be no service at all. However, there are things more important than taste and service, and they are food safety, nutrition, cost, and the feel of home.

由于细碎的点多,需要合并成更少的段落(两个段落)。

立论第一个段落:Cooking at home is for better food safety and healthful eating.

立论第一个段落:Cooking at home is cost-effective, and the ease of eating in the home environment is certainly desirable.

(老实说,找个话题的论证要求仅仅比口语话题略高。所以笔者的论证过程此处略。大家可以把自己的习作段落发在留言区,笔者会去回复点评。)

结尾段落时,不要过分重复主体部分已经讨论透彻的内容。

加快信息速度, 仍然要避免读者的厌恶感。

At this point, I strongly suggest that people cook at home for safe and healthful eating, lower expenses, and the ease。 Those benefits apparently outweigh the good taste chefs can achieve and the service restaurants can provide。

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